Learn the difference between how we talk to friends and how we write for school or professional settings.
Imagine sending a text to your best friend that says, 'Greetings, I am inquiring about our scheduled meeting.' Sounds weird, right? But what if you sent your principal a text saying, 'Yo, what's up?'
In writing, tone is the 'attitude' your words carry. Just like you wear a hoodie to play outside but might wear a suit to a wedding, you choose different words based on your situation. Informal tone is casual and relaxed. We use it with friends and family. It often includes slang (like 'fire' or 'bet') and contractions (like 'don't' or 'can't'). Formal tone is professional and serious. We use it for school essays, emails to teachers, and job applications. It uses full sentences, proper grammar, and precise vocabulary.
Quick Check
Which type of tone would you use when writing a thank-you note to a local business owner?
Answer
Formal tone
To make your writing sound formal, you need to follow a few simple rules. First, avoid contractions. Instead of writing , you should write . Second, avoid slang or 'text-speak' like 'LOL' or 'u'. Third, use objective language. This means focusing on facts rather than just saying 'I think' or 'I feel.' For example, instead of saying 'I think the book was cool,' a formal writer might say, 'The novel provided an engaging perspective on history.'
In formal writing, we expand words to their full form. 1. Informal: 'He can't go to the park.' 2. Formal: 'He cannot go to the park.' 3. Informal: 'They won't finish the project.' 4. Formal: 'They will not finish the project.'
Quick Check
How would you rewrite the contraction 'shouldn't' for a formal essay?
Answer
should not
Informal language often uses 'vague' words like stuff, things, or really. In a formal setting, we want to be as precise as possible. Instead of saying 'The scientist did a lot of stuff,' you could say 'The scientist conducted several experiments.' This makes your writing clearer and more convincing. Think of it as a formula: . By replacing 'get' with 'receive' or 'obtain,' you immediately sound more professional.
Imagine you are emailing a teacher about a late assignment. 1. Informal (Bad): 'Hey, sorry I'm late with my work. I'll get it to u later.' 2. Formal (Good): 'Dear Mr. Henderson, please accept my apologies for the late submission. I will provide the completed assignment by 4:00 PM today.'
Combine everything you've learned to rewrite this messy peer review: 'Your story is okay, but the ending is kinda weird and I don't get it.' 1. Step 1 (Remove slang/vague words): Change 'okay' to 'well-written' and 'kinda weird' to 'unclear.' 2. Step 2 (Remove contractions): Change 'don't' to 'do not.' 3. Step 3 (Final Result): 'The story is well-written; however, the conclusion is unclear, and I do not fully understand the resolution.'
Which of the following sentences is written in a FORMAL tone?
When is it most appropriate to use an INFORMAL tone?
In formal writing, it is better to use the word 'stuff' than to name specific items.
Review Tomorrow
In 24 hours, try to remember the three main things to avoid in formal writing (Slang, Contractions, and Vague Words).
Practice Activity
Find a recent text message you sent. Try to rewrite it as if you were sending it to the President of the United States!